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Rick and Mistel fooling around Drawn with a Wacom Intuos tablet. Hopefully it look more precise
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Rick and Mistel fooling around Drawn with a Wacom Intuos tablet. Hopefully it look more precise
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You've made a lot of progress in just two years! One can really tell you're getting a lot better at this. Just look at this page! The coloring is really good, and the layout and pacing is clearly readable and flows well.
I think small things like doing something about the bubbles and the font you use could make a large difference in the overall appearance of your pages. I find that bubbles that are not quite oval, but rather a bit flat at the sides (like a mix between an oval and a square) looks better, and is a lot easier to fit text in!
There were some spelling errors and oddly structured sentences every now and then, but I don't think you should worry too much about that. It's an easy fix, after all.
When it comes to the storytelling and the plot, well, it's getting better and better! In the beginning things seemed to happen a little bit randomly, but it's getting more interesting as we're getting more clues as to what is going on.
All in all: Keep up the good work! You're clearly passionate about this, and it shows c: So just don't loose that driving force, and keep practising! You're gonna do great ;D
I think small things like doing something about the bubbles and the font you use could make a large difference in the overall appearance of your pages. I find that bubbles that are not quite oval, but rather a bit flat at the sides (like a mix between an oval and a square) looks better, and is a lot easier to fit text in!
There were some spelling errors and oddly structured sentences every now and then, but I don't think you should worry too much about that. It's an easy fix, after all.
When it comes to the storytelling and the plot, well, it's getting better and better! In the beginning things seemed to happen a little bit randomly, but it's getting more interesting as we're getting more clues as to what is going on.
All in all: Keep up the good work! You're clearly passionate about this, and it shows c: So just don't loose that driving force, and keep practising! You're gonna do great ;D