So I have made a long overdue cleanup of page 1-29. Tried to cut down on text where I can (Less is more), and tried to fix typos and weird sentences I did not see the first time.
I also done some rearrange of the text bubbles and made the style be more similar through the entire comic.
I have also removed frames that was not needed to tell the story.
If you want to give the first 29 pages a new readthrough, please let me know what you think